Did another couple of scenes in the first draft tonight nearing the end of it but the biggest issues are
1. belladonnas character appears to be bipolar in this script (probably just the effect of putting the story toghether.
2. its incredibly long. This is due to my attempt to make the film appeal to both fans of the character as well as provide an enjoyable experience for everyone else. this will be edited down a lot as at the state its in at the moment its just not feasible.
3. I keep having creative surges when im writing it resulting in a bunch of sub plots that are totally unnescesary.
the short story is the first draft is terrible. This will change though im just glad im aware of it.
should have a marketable script by early-mid November (way before I hand in the draft proposal hopefully.)
not much depth to this update but just keeping you informed.
Peace.
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